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Splendor of Poetic Word
Contributed by
venkat
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Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:44:00 AM in AEST
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I bow to the goddess of speech
Saraswati, who is pure like ice,
Sanctifies like camphor flame
Who is resplendent like full moon
That rains nectar on her devotees,
Lustrous like necklace of pearls
Shining with a body of golden brilliance
With garlands of golden wax flowers
Hanging on her lofty luscious breasts,
To attain the speech with splendor
And poetry divine I pray to her!
Salutations to Saraswati, the Goddess
And the protector of universe seated
On a white lotus wearing a white
Shining apparel, besmeared with
Sweet scented unguents and anointed
With white sandal pastes, adorned
With white glittering jewels and
Holds in her hands the universe
As a diamond lute, while the sages
Sing hymns of praise, I pray to her
To attain the speech of splendor
And poetry with glorious word!
4-5-2005
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:55:02 AM AEST
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Your prayers my friend, have been heard and answered some time ago. Your eloquence with words has been a pleasure and a long standing staple of this site ... once again, a beautiful devotion to influential spirits. May you continue for all time to reap the benefits and bounty of her favors.
Nazzy ~ |
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:08:09 AM AEST
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A very elegent, beautifull write.
Awesome as all your writes are.
huggs,
emy |
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:10:26 AM AEST
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indeed, if u need to ask for more writeing skill thanu have now i think you r a bit greedy lol :D
SM |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:16:38 AM AEST
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Venkat my dear friend this is absolutely divine. Heavenly sweet and so eloquently written. A delight and pleasure to read ur beautiful work. Whatever u write about u capture the essence of it so well. Nothing less to what I expected from u dear friend.
Hugs,
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:05:43 AM AEST
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A textured piece, adorned with unearthly figurative and descriptive language.
“Sanctifies like camphor flame”
As well as heart-warming similes.
“Who is resplendent like full moon”
The metaphors, divine and visually tasteful, most viscous and lush!
“That rains nectar on her devotees,
Lustrous like necklace of pearls”
I adore the terminology and congruency, the Goddesses and her natural alliances.
“Holds in her hands the universe
As a diamond lute, while the sages
Sing hymns of praise, I pray to her
To attain the speech of splendor
And poetry with glorious word!”
An extraordinary write, most unfathomable and spiritual.
*Nods*
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:57:53 AM AEST
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| Great writing as always. Your words always draw from the depth of life and give ment reason to pray. |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 03:14:26 AM AEST
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Venkat, this was just outstandingly beautiful.
your words are so amazingly chosen to write this wonderful poem.
Good Write,
Jane |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:10:23 AM AEST
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As always, my dear friend, your work is out of this world!! I cannot attempt to add anything to those wonderful praises already bestoyed upon you and your poem....
Thank you...
Jenni |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:16:13 AM AEST
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| Venkat, this is absolutely perfect. |
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:43:05 PM AEST
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wow the master of all poets .
awsome awsome. |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:52:28 AM AEST
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ah! there you are! I saw you hanging around in the members online section and thought to myself I haven't read a venkat poem for a while.
So here I am and now I have!
Your work never fails to amaze me. Such spirituality in one mind. All i can say about this is...
WOW!
Johnny. |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:51:37 PM AEST
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Oh Venkat you never disappoint me kind Sir.
This was eloquent, exquisite, and words can not describe!
Thanking you so much Venkat for your nice comments on my poems also.
They appreciated it very much
Warm poetic love,
ConSue |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 09:00:54 PM AEST
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truely one of your most beautiful poems, dear venkat, i love this one, it is flowing and gives me a small glimpse into your heart, blessings, huggies n' love always, nessa
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 06:51:19 AM AEST
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| Perfectly beautiful and amazing work |
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:44:47 AM AEST
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| Tender, elegant & beautiful.... Amazing poem!!! |
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:53:26 PM AEST
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| =], ive missed your poetry venkat, and this piece reminds me of all the wonderful poems that i havent seen in a while. this reminds me of some of my poems on the muses. very well done, though from such an accomplished poet, that is to be expected. have a nice day as always.... |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 04:29:55 PM AEST
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Ahhhhhhhhhmy dear kind Sir.
No one will ever be able to match your beautiful poetry, Venkat........no one has the depth of heart and feeling that you can always put down on paper.........How I enjoy reading your poems....they take me to wondrous beautiful places and there you let view all your splendor. Remarkable
And you are so generous with your comments, also.
Thanking you for everyone Venkat
Warm Poetic Love
Lovingcritters..........and poets too
consue |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 06:08:28 AM AEST
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eloquent as only you can do my friend
Shari |
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by reflections on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:23:10 AM AEST
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A magnificent descriptive prose concerning the beauty of one’s thoughts and praise. One can almost smell the scented salves and distinctive aroma of mind filling incense accenting the mystical effects of the moment.
John
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by blueheart on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 07:15:02 AM AEST
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Ah... :)
* Smitten by the beauty of the poem * |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by Kie on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 05:24:13 AM AEST
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The title is beyond perfect. You know I have seen paintings and artwork from India and they leave me speechless at the remarkable, delicacy, time & patience and the colors, oh so beautiful, especially wedding attire oh and the jewelry as well.
My point to all of this is your poetry is so gorgeous and uplifting, wise yet youthful.
A wonderful poet you are.
Kie |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 10:11:14 PM AEST
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As you bow to the goddess of speach
I bow to you
How long have you been writing for? |
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:43:11 AM AEST
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Silence of awe is what your splendid words inspire.But man must communicate with speech and words of appreciation, no matter how inadequate they may be.
You have been blessed "Superabundantly" .
I read your poem over and over again, plus the comments and accolades of peers in poetry.. and noticed you went through trials and suffering. Lady Grief brought you benefits Venkat Sir, and sharpened the quill.and wound the lute' s strings and cords to sound so as to capture the hearts of your readers in storm.
What grief can do!
And now I am going to re-read your inspiring work and then keep "silent" in admiration.
Be blessed!..
Elizabeth
(chronically the last commenter)
Porca Miseria!
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Re: Splendor of Poetic Word
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 07:54:43 AM AEST
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A well written poem. Great detail work, you visualized the image well.
Take care.
David |
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by thumper on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:38:38 AM AEST
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Your words paint such a vivid masterpiece upon one's imagination. Some poetry is just words to be understood, but your poetry is to be absorbed in all it's glory. Like a great painting, or a fine wine. Excellent work, my friend. You deserve all the kudos you recieve and then some. And, I thank you for your kind comments on my blathering. lol Take care and Peace to you, deserve it.
Thumps ;o) |
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by Bizzy on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 12:44:36 AM AEST
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| Friend Venkat, what beautiful imagry! You are a word master with heart. Friend Bizzy |
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 01:38:47 PM AEST
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A beautiful peice. Your writting is magical and sincere.
myheartsvoice
Thank you for your comment means a lot coming from one who write's as well as you do. |
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 27th March 2007 @ 04:27:53 PM AEST
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A most beautiful peice of writting. Lovely to read and presented in a most reverand style.
Ben |
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