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Last Lily Standing

Contributed by forgottenone_iam on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:53:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

How could i leave the one i loved,
the one i cared for, for so long and
with all my heart, my mind was
racing how could i do that.

I went down there just for a small
good-bye, I keep asking myself
why?

I look up at him and i see that
he is crying, why did i do that,
i look at him and say i'm srry
i love you but i am in to much
pain when you are gone.

My heart breaks a lil more,
i get up and walk away, tears
just keep on rolling down my cheeks,
they wont stop.

I cant handle this anymore, i am
always in pain, i turn around to
see him standing there as i left him,
i dont know how much longer i can
just watch him stand there.

I know i did something so wrong,
i want to go and wrap my arms around
him and say sorry, i need to explain why
i broke his heart.

I debate if i should or not and i cant
handle it i have to explain, i walk back
and explain why i broke his heart,
I tell him i dont want to hurt any longer
and i dont want to hurt him anymore.

I mean i love him with all my heart
but i am tired of seeing couples walking
down the hall holding hands, i wish that
was us but it will never happen, he looks
at me with those crystal blue eyes and says
if you feel that way, then we can be good
friends but i want you to know i will always
love you and i will never forget you.

And at that moment he kisses me once
again, i dont want to leave now, he
wispers in my ear before letting me go,
when the last lily dies then my love for you is dead.

He gets up and walks away, i sit there
for a while and think on what he said,
i am so confused on what that is supposed
to mean, i think on it all night and when
i get home i put my 12 lily's in water and
wait for them to die.

Every week one lil die's, then there
is two more lily's left and when that
one died i started to cry.

There was only one left i took it out of
the water and realized it was fake and
it will never die, i pick up the phone call
him and when he picks up i say i love you.

and that is how we got back together and
i could never live without him again,
its to hard.

Copyright © forgottenone_iam ... [ 2005-05-03 20:53:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Last Lily Standing (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 07:39:18 PM AEST
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Very sweet......Nice poem...God Bless!

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