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my pain is now yours
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:26:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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sitting here
knife in hand
pushing the cold blade
aginst my hot flesh
when I relize
why should I hurt myself
for what youve done?
Now Im at your door
Ill make you feel the pain
you put me through
you come to the door
a shocked look on your face
when you see my knife in the moon light
now its in your chest
I pull it out
stabing again and again
till the rage is gone
I leave you dying on your lawn
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2005-05-03 20:26:05]
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Re: my pain is now yours
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by Zeldianus on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:28:57 PM AEST
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| very nice! i really like this! ahhh, sweet vengence! |
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Re: my pain is now yours
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 07:47:14 AM AEST
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| Good stuff, raw, gritty, truthfull and the last line made me laugh...I think it sent me into a mild state of shock, rhyming the last too lines really emphasised your uhmm... knife-point, well written |
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