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Eternally Alone
Contributed by
Zeldianus
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:23:19 PM in AEST
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My soul is black;
My heart is alone.
I am seen by none;
Even as they gaze into my eyes
I know they do not see.
Although I am surrounded my masses
I am still alone.
They beat me and trample me
Yet they do not see
And so I remain ever alone.
My bloodied and bruised body screams
In sorrow for a savior to save me
From my agony.
All I get in answer is my echo
Sent back to mock me, again reminding me that I am alone.
My heart is exausted; my body is dead.
Sleep must I,
Completely isolated from my hurt.
An escape I need,
To perhaps regain my strength.
Down, down into the earth I go,
Lying on the cold ground.
Nothing is what I hear;
Nothing is waht I feel.
Now I am happy; now I smile.
Copyright ©
Zeldianus
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Re: Eternally Alone
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:49:29 PM AEST
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I like this one the best, It has structure rhythmn and a good rhyme...very well portreyed message and a very good ending..Well Done Seth, once again
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Re: Eternally Alone
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by iluvpencils on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:53:15 PM AEST
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| Awesome...I can relate so much. Trust me, I know exactly how you feel and so do hundreds of other people--even if we can't see you physically right now. Keep rocking and don't give up hope. |
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Re: Eternally Alone
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by OnAngelswings on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:58:27 AM AEST
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| Seth...this is a good one ...I hope these feelings change for you someday soon...it will happen ,we just never know when is all....Shari :) |
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Re: Eternally Alone
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by Sensommar on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 09:54:29 PM AEST
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| sometimes you can feel that you want to be part of the soil instead of walking on it ..a very dark but beautiful poem ..with love Pia |
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Re: Eternally Alone
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 12:56:54 PM AEST
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Powerful write there Seth...In many ways I can relate to this. I like the first stanza and the last two best...I hope things have improved since this was written...
Scorp. |
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Re: Eternally Alone
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by Dorkfish on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 04:10:06 PM AEST
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| Great write, full of emotions. You really make us understand how you're feeling at the moment. I'm sure we've all felt something like that at some point. Great job! |
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