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my last night
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:18:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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should i do it
who will care?
Im just a pain
a failor
a '***** up'
as you say
you
the one person
i thought I could trust
you put me down
enforcing
the negative thougts about myself
the tears now
mixing with the blood
this will be my last night
spent in pain
I hope I didnt let you down
or maybe I proved your point
Ill be nothing in life
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2005-05-03 20:18:53]
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Re: my last night
(User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:35:38 PM AEST
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| omg awsome poem... i think it is a great one...we all feel like that...some people just dont understand |
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Re: my last night
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:44:58 PM AEST
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Dont ever think your nothing in life.
To us poet and poetress you are something to us all here.Dont give up.
well done on the write. |
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Re: my last night
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 07:48:46 AM AEST
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| Jesus I felt like I was skinned raw after I read this, good job |
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