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A *****
Contributed by
shrunkin_fool34142316
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 07:53:48 PM in AEST
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pretending to be so happy
smiling and blowing off the rest of the world
as if i couldn't care
i suppose she was right
i really have been quite the *****
even though my baby says no
i see it, i guess
the lies, the jokes, the late night cries
i wake up to the screams
the youth within
screaming for relief
sighs escape the motionless body
the youth has escaped
the lifeless *****
the one that doesn't care
the one you hate with all your might
i will no longer be pushed around
a *****, if i must
already it seems
you declared the battle
but i'm declaring the war
you pushed my limits
you struke
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Re: A *****
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by spazz911 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:10:40 PM AEST
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| good poem...the ***** within |
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Re: A *****
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:26:51 PM AEST
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| someone really messed with your head...good writes. |
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Re: A *****
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by blue_angel on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:19:37 PM AEST
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wow... amazing i can totally relate to this.
keep up the good werk and ill keep reading.
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: A *****
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by libra on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:40:45 PM AEST
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We all have a ***** within ourselves.
thank u 4 the cool poetry about the person who talks to us at night. |
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Re: A *****
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:50:53 PM AEST
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I HOPE I NEVER GET YOU MAD! A GREAT POEM ABOUT INNER THOUGHTS & ALL THE DEMONS THAT ARE CAUGHT!! ROCK ON-& MOST OF ALL.....TRY & SMILE!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: A *****
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by FlirtQueen on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:02:46 PM AEST
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| that was such a deep poem, i know how you feel good job |
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