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Savage Thoughts Tear me
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:43:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Savage thoughts they've come to tear me
From this Newly found heavenly
bliss
It's Evil and Corruption you want
Satans promises with
All Its' Charms
It invades our being
Making us small
and stupid
Not thinking at all
The Stench of Its'
Lies
Fills my nose
and Purulence Sodomy
Fills ones' Whole Being
As it begins to fill with Disgust
Anger Rages
As Its' Never Raged Before.
Tears of molted Lava streams
down
Setting fire all around
Burning Hell Hot
fuel from the
Very ground .
Laughter Crackes
Wicked ,Conviencing and Loud
Deafening , Erasing and
Taking All Decent thought
Away.
Coaxing from this Supreme Evil
Calling
And Bidding
Do His Will
Dark
Creepy thoughts Arise
In my Now growing vile guts
Engulfing its Host - I
Evil reigns and controls
again
Jealousy , Evil killing thoughts
and urges ever consuming of
Wild Wantings.
Dare I say it
"To make my Skin Crawl .
To Cut, and Slash
All in my path
And make Damn sure
you see
It too
Bleeds."
Blamed for things that I can't control
Questions spat like knives to wound
Evil enters and and leaves its bed .
Empty
hollow
filling my head.
Is it Death who's Calling
No
Not Yet
Whisper
*Ps This one actually frightened me -the way it released .
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-05-03 17:43:18]
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Re: Savage Thoughts Tear me
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:48:06 PM AEST
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This is magnificent i enjoyed reading it very much u write well keep it up like your style . . .
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Re: Savage Thoughts Tear me
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:01:36 AM AEST
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Whisper this was very deep indeed!
I've always enjoyed your poetry, and this one took me to places unknown.......but it was great!
Warm Love
Lovingcritters
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Re: Savage Thoughts Tear me
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by secretwind on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:25:42 AM AEST
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EXCELLEN
don't know how I missed this
deep innervision. |
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Re: Savage Thoughts Tear me
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by secretwind on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:27:04 AM AEST
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Excellent
Don't know how I missed this
deep InnerVision |
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