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Vengence
Contributed by
anabanana
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:50:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The blood is flowing,
cold is the core.
The time has come
to settle our score.
Never more ready,
our nerves are shot.
Here they left
our bodies to rot.
They left us for dead,
we came back to life.
Take a stab in the chest
with an old rusty knife.
May you feel our pain,
for your blood will rain.
From what it spells,
you'll hear our names.
Feel the knife
as we pound it in.
Soon you will pay
for all of your sins.
The things we do to you
couldn't be worse.
You make our work easy
to beak this curse.
Where once we died
by the work of your hands,
we lay you to rest
beneath the cold sands.
The last breath taken,
how great was our fun.
Here we did battle
and evil has won.
Copyright ©
anabanana
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2005-05-03 15:50:20]
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Re: Vengence
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 04:13:54 PM AEST
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omg this poem is fulled with emotion,its so dark.i love it,great write well done
love han xxx |
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Re: Vengence
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:17:23 PM AEST
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| Great write. very passionate |
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Re: Vengence
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by brokengirl on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 07:28:58 PM AEST
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| a very dark poem. but a great poem, filled with so much emotion. |
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