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My Living Hell
Contributed by
justme03
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:49:13 PM in AEST
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Cold, drafty, heartless, and black
Broken in two
Melting like wax
Nauseousness and resltess
Mind gone wack
Craziness and in a state of psychological
nerves
Lost in the depths of a schizophrenic mind
Scarred for life on the inside and out
Istitution of mental calculation
medication to supress perversion
Listening to the voices
trapped in my head
hearing them say
all the things I dread
They say I am mental
and need a doctor to analyze me
that I should be administered a psychological evaluation
to understand the way I think
Am I not human?
Am I not one of them?
Am I an alien, on they will never comprehend?
I dont understand this
I know I have always been different. . .strange even,
but. . .this is absurd
the way I am being treated
They talk as if I don't understand
They talk as if I can't understand
But, damn it! I do understand!
I understand it all
and it makes me feel so very insignificant and small
You tear me apart
from the inside out
Making my mind be filled with doubt
It poisons my mind;
the way I think
I believe I am mental
and on the brink
of falling down into the abyss
of hell
Just lock me up already, in my purified, padded cell
You can't make it any worse
I have already
fallen under your spell
Here to dwell forever
in my living hell
~Kortnie~
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Re: My Living Hell
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by mylady on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:55:43 PM AEST
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| nice... don't doubt your self be you.. good luck.. |
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Re: My Living Hell
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 01:48:58 PM AEST
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| Good poem. I really like the last paragraph. |
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Re: My Living Hell
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by WideEyedFrog on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:39:16 PM AEST
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| I think this is the best poem you have written. Very good, very powerful |
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Re: My Living Hell
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:08:12 PM AEST
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daaaaayyyymmmnnnnn kortnie......u got some crazy writing do you know that?!? i have no idea how u come up with your material, but its great!
-Courtney
~XOXO~
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Re: My Living Hell
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by PoisonousPyscho on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 07:52:47 PM AEST
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omg Kortnie i love you!!! isn't it so funny how our poems relate to each other ? i bet if we knew each other on a more close state(as in we lived near each other) we be one hell of a pair of best friends
Love Always
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Re: My Living Hell
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by colinbaker62 on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:41:00 PM AEST
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A very powerful poem indeed. Poetry so readily captures the essence of a given moment in time. Wonderful stuff.
Colin |
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