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If I could scream out sorrow.
Contributed by
Kay-P-M-Devenish
on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
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If screaming was the way to end all sorrows
(the likes that ache of melancholy ill,)
the one in me
would last for all life’s morrows,
and NEVER
would I hear the sound of STILL.
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Kay-P-M-Devenish
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2002-12-27 14:30:00]
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Re: If I could scream out sorrow.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 04:04:04 PM AEST
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Hi Kay..can you hear mine????
Happy New Year!!
Jenni |
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Re: If I could scream out sorrow.
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by Mystery_Girl on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 04:38:34 PM AEST
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| This is short but deep and straight to the point ......take care....tanya,,,,,,:-) |
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Re: If I could scream out sorrow.
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:32:43 PM AEST
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I hope your sorrow lifts from you soon my friend, this is a short sad and deep poem...thanks for sharing it ..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: If I could scream out sorrow.
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:29:03 PM AEST
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Yes, this was very short. I don't understand the lines, "and NEVER would I hear the sound of STILL." What does that mean this was good though.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: If I could scream out sorrow.
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by Kay-P-M-Devenish on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 03:38:19 AM AEST
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Have you heard the phrase
'The sound of silence"
well... what I meant by the 'sound of still'
is thesame as sound of silence
that meaning...the scream would last for all eternity...as the sorrow is that long...an exageration yes but poetic license gives me that right.
Hope that clears it up...thanks for asking.
Best wishes always
from
Kay. |
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Re: If I could scream out sorrow.
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 07:50:57 PM AEST
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Excellent Kay
huggs & love
always Nessa |
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Re: If I could scream out sorrow.
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by kangarose on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 05:12:03 PM AEST
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| as always kay nice write |
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