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Bottom of a bottle
Contributed by
bear
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 11:57:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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All alone in my room
Sitting in all my shame
With nothing but a bottle
That just keeps calling my name
I grab the bottle
I start to drink
As I reach the bottom
I begin to think
My life is empty
Its full of remorse
I have nothing left inside
My life has left its course
I sit and drink somemore
Wondering when I will reach the bottom
Wondering when I will breath no more
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bear
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2005-05-03 11:57:57]
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Re: Bottom of a bottle
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:30:21 PM AEST
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Good write . It leaves the reader sadly able to relate to how one would be feeling. And the common question When comes round as it often does.
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Re: Bottom of a bottle
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:38:11 PM AEST
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| Your poetry is deeply sad and full of feeling. I hope you have someone you can confide in. |
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