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alone again
Contributed by
conz
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:38:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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my lonely last words to a bruised and tortured soul,
double seven days past found unreserected,
caravans of unhappy where i felt rejected,
left alone i know no better,
st peters gate gain entrance through a sweater,
and fallen chair,
you've never felt the hurt i've seen and been subjected towards,
the unseen injurys caused by pontless meaninless wars,
snap decession fighting the good book,
the last look,
through a door way portal,
forget being mortal when your heart is breaking,
and lifes no better when the bottle ends,
make belive and kids pretend,
that things like this,
dont excist,
outside of other peoples problems,
put it in a wooden box add the soil but it wont solve them,
i cause meaningless fights with the emotions that i lack,
i cryed and cryed and broke my spine but it will never bring him back
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conz
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2005-05-03 10:38:28]
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Re: alone again
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:47:00 PM AEST
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| Lots of meaningful emotion. A suggestion if I may; do a spell check before you submit so it's easier for fellow readers to understand. Good poem from the heart... |
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Re: alone again
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by SkC_cutie on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:29:55 AM AEST
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| Your poem is very meaningful and sad |
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