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Contributed by
PainfulSpirit06
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:49:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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If I leave here now, I may never come back
I just need some fresh air but I don't know
I feel so vandalized by you, your ways
No matter how much I tend to love them
I want to fight this, and just be released from
my needs and my wants
I want to cry, hoping it'll be released,
My pain, through every tear that I shed
Scrambled and uncontrollable thoughts
Somethings I think are unspeakable thoughts
The others I just hold up and keep them pent up
And lately the up is down, so I feel I have
Nothing to look forward to anymore
Even the silence we share between us is louder
than anything being said
So tell me what you want me to do
Please I am begging of you
If I leave here now, It'll be because of you
Copyright ©
PainfulSpirit06
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2005-05-03 08:49:12]
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Re: Leave
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by Concrete_Rose on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 10:09:03 AM AEST
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| Beautiflul write, sad to say,but i feel this way even with or without someone, i love the flow of the poem, and how you smoothly stayed on topic, i hope that some day i have a happy ending so i won't have to LEAVE...great job |
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Re: Leave
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by Dri on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:18:18 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful... the honesty is amazing, and the way the words flow... keep writing! |
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