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so sorry
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 07:14:06 AM in AEST
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You called me to say she had broke your heart today
what might i ask,,, do you want me to say,
that maybe your better off this way..
but the words that came to mind were
how dare you call me after you shattered me
and made me doubt all that i am
to run to someone who did to you what you did to me
i'm sorry but thats the way you wanted it to be
you made me hate my self
now the pain is all yours,
so sorry...
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2005-05-03 07:14:06]
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Re: so sorry
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 07:26:47 AM AEST
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I don't know what to say about this...
Just..wow.
It seems confused and jumbled to my mind, yet in an odd way, it makes sense...
Touching, again...
Beautiful...just wow!
~Kt |
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Re: so sorry
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 07:32:20 AM AEST
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| Plain and simple words that express truth. Great poem. |
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Re: so sorry
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:14:25 AM AEST
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they say what goes around comes around. You've written this very well. A good write.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: so sorry
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 01:56:10 AM AEST
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Sad but great write.
glad u sstuck up for yourself like that.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: so sorry
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by imsorryulied on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:25:11 PM AEST
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loved it ... good job..
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