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Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
Contributed by
jackwilde
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:06:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When my dad was young,
He dreamed a lot about silk,
Lying in his quilt…
It was silk this…
Silk that…
One day a silky woman appeared,
His young and bright face said,
“Silk is alive!”
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jackwilde
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2005-05-03 02:06:32]
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Re: Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:09:48 AM AEST
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call me biased! but...
Well done Jack.
Love daddy x |
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Re: Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:59:58 AM AEST
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Very sweet of u to do this for your dad. I know he's proud of u.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:37:07 AM AEST
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Aww Jack I'm glad you had a fun b-day yesterday sweetie.
So who is this silky woman LOL, she sounds like fun.
Big Kiss,
Janey |
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Re: Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:38:57 AM AEST
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Aww Jack I'm glad you had a fun b-day yesterday sweetie.
So who is this silky woman LOL, she sounds like fun.
Big Kiss,
Janey |
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Re: Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 07:51:04 AM AEST
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Jack, this is splendid. Sounds just like something your Daddy would do and say to me. Wow, now there are two of you. How very lucky for us. Can't wait to read more. Belated Happy Birthday.
Dove |
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Re: Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
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by brew on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:09:30 AM AEST
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Cute write........Happy late b-day
Brew~ |
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Re: Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:16:11 PM AEST
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aww hehehe that was so cute and lovely, well done Jack ,that was an adoreable write,
pix xx :):) |
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Re: Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
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by dtborchert on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:29:31 AM AEST
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Jack- in the words of your daddy: "That was brilliant, mate! Cheers!" Well done, sweetheart.
x,
Tena |
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Re: Silky woman (for my dad Johnny)
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:50:45 AM AEST
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dear jack, this is excellent, a perfect and complete thought; poetry in motion, cant stay long this morning and im so happy i happened to see you here whilst looking quickly through the main page, i promise to read your other poems soon:) *is still smiling about your ending* never stop writing hun, you are already competition for your daddy! hugs n' love nessa
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