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fake
Contributed by
karmen
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:51:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You held in all these secrets
And believable lies
I thought I could trust you
But now I realize
You were just fake
And wanted to make me believe
Well I did, but now I know the truth
That all you did was deceive
Its hard to believe I loved you
Or at least I felt that way
Now its so far from that
Its so hard to even say
You’re using things you shouldn’t
And hurting yourself more then ever, I figure.
I hope you see what you lost
You’re pulling your own trigger
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-05-03 00:51:38]
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Re: fake
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:56:23 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: fake
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by Zeldianus on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 01:07:33 AM AEST
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| i really like this. i can completely relate to it with the people that have hurt me in the past. Well Done!!! |
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Re: fake
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:18:56 AM AEST
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how often we find these situations, i know how it feels i've lived it manytimes....
but you captured the emotion well in this peice...great write...
tasha |
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