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Reminders in Mass Destruction
Contributed by
espeeayzee
on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:26:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Sudden earthquakes leave remnants and after-shocks
dismantling concrete for further generations
Underneath the debris that was erected high above civilization
we crawl form underneath with eyes toward the silhouette
where the tower tickled the bellies of clouds
As we now look up, we are reminded of our blindness
now we see how necessary it was for the Earth to crack
It serves the reminder that we are the ones built to transcend the clouds
preparing like warriors who patiently await the next road block toward infinity
Copyright ©
espeeayzee
... [
2005-05-03 00:26:08]
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Re: Reminders in Mass Destruction
(User Rating: 1 )
by miss_jules on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:52:48 AM AEST
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| I like this poem a lot. I think it has a good message about humanity and an excellent use of language. Great job. |
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Re: Reminders in Mass Destruction
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by Archie on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:21:36 AM AEST
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| This is pretty good. Sometimes i think we forget that we have a soul. |
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Re: Reminders in Mass Destruction
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by Astralbermudian on
Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 10:40:44 AM AEST
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| wow this is reeking with brilliance. No lines are seriously out of sync and the meaning is clear and not forced! Great read |
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