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Cut
Contributed by
spazz911
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:25:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Cut off from the world
The feeling of life
No one to talk to
No way to end our strife
Sting of the razor
As it slices your skin
It is your escape
From the pain that you’re in
Yell of the voices
As they see what you’ve done
How could you do that?
You disappoint them
But how could you do that?
More pain this creates
So you do it again
You find your escape
Free for a moment
A small tick in time
They can’t take this from you
You wont play their game
Copyright ©
spazz911
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2005-05-02 20:25:24]
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Re: Cut
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:32:02 PM AEST
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eh...yes and no..But I'm only one person that knows this feeling (previously)..so my reason was a little different..but in a sence the same....All tho..I did like the poem..Great job
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Re: Cut
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:00:34 PM AEST
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| great poem, and there are lot's of reasons, but this is one of them. |
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Re: Cut
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by crazy on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 10:47:00 AM AEST
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| yes and no i did cut so did my friends you feel like crap the only way to syop is to feel the pain of the razor in your skin to see the blood makes all the difference it take your mind off everything else but after you do it for so long it becomes an addiction to where you cant feel it any more asnd you do i be cause you have for so long nicely writen i hope that helps explain it better |
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