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forever my angel

Contributed by sp3llicup on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:31:48 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

everything happend so fast
no all we can do is thnk of the past
you were the only one who called me chele
now that your gone my world has become hell

in a blink of an eye, your whole life changed
laying there in the hospital bed, i knew nothing would be the same
you held my hands so tight
telling me how much you loved me, everything will be alright

stay strong grandpa your going to pull through
that was the last time i heard you talk, strong like you
you had to stay in ICU for acouple days
hanging on the whole way

couldnt open your eyes or speak
ide hold your hand and whisper in your ear, so you knew it was me
everyone was silent with whole family in the room
watching you suffocate, but there was nothing we could do

it was your time to go
God will show the way for you
look down on us from the sky
i will make you proud untill the day i die

family cirlce is broken
but we will all reunite one day in heaven
i love you so much ill never forget
all the amazing memories ill talk to you about in heaven
sweet angel of mine
ill take it slow, one day at a time

1928-wjk-2003
forever my angel

not a day goes by that i dont think of you

Copyright © sp3llicup ... [ 2005-05-02 18:31:48]
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Re: forever my angel (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:30:45 PM AEST
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gosh, that is so sad, but still strong in your words. amazingly written, thanks for sharing,
jennie*

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