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Elven Days
Contributed by
corbin286
on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Cruelty beckoned my tears.
Hushed screams sharpen my fears.
Silky desire ended the battle.
And begun the war.
Thy words echo in my soul.
A chilling peace lulls the shore.
As Luthian's sun meets the morning sky.
Night fades as Ember's moon falls to the stars.
Copyright ©
corbin286
... [
2002-12-27 11:00:00]
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Re: Elven Days
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 04:42:58 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful fantasy poem....i love this, it has beautiful visions and it's full of depth....and emotion...thanks for sharing this one it's beautiful...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Elven Days
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by Sonibe on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:42:51 PM AEST
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| I love Fantasy!....Elves rock....Honestly, I believe that Elves and Dragons still exist in the Realm of Gaia (Earth)...Do you know how to translate that to Elven? I'm trying to learn it myself. Nice poem....keep up the good work.... |
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Re: Elven Days
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 09:53:41 PM AEST
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| This is really beautiful. The wording of it is perfect. Good write! |
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Re: Elven Days
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by thorns on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 01:43:41 AM AEST
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| ??? i assume this is about some story with which i'm unfamiliar. |
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Re: Elven Days
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by Spirit_Dancer on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:10:45 AM AEST
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| This was so pretty...soft, and gentle. Very Nice! |
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