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YOU
Contributed by
crazygirl
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:12:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You confuse and abuse me and the fact that i care for you.
You upset, yet protect me, only confusing me more
You hate me and love me
You've lost me you've found me
You've kissed me you've hugged me
You drank away my pain for you
You packed it up and gave it back
You shoved the hurt straight through my heart
You pushed me toward the edge
You told me i should jump, knowing i would listen
Falling, falling, Leaving you, oh my god how i love you
You watch me fall to my death
You watch happily with no regret, as i crash and feel the pain
I caused you to live with
Now i have it too, only i am dying with it.... without you
Copyright ©
crazygirl
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2005-05-02 18:12:19]
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Re: YOU
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by footballfan385 on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:29:05 PM AEST
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| whoa, that's a pretty dark love poem, nice job sharing your feelings like that, and what's that?.....is that a litle charles dicken's A Tale of Two Cities i read in the begininng?!!? "You hate me and love me You've lost me you've found me" man, i didn't like reading that book for school, well, anyway, good job with this poem, and um, don't jump or anything, i know a friend's friend that did that and i wrote a poem on here about that, check it out if you want, it's called "The Road To Fate" and anyway, this is a good poem, keep writing! |
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Re: YOU
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by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:04:46 PM AEST
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Love cannot exist without pain.
Just as the moon can never glimmer without the sky.
Beautiful poem.
Emotions are well mixed up.
Keep writing!
-Butch |
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Re: YOU
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:49:14 PM AEST
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A very nice poem. Really sad too. I hope you are feeling better now.
Scott |
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