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The Silverblade
Contributed by
dark_descent
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 04:09:16 PM in AEST
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Your razor edge is so enticing, so inviting
Your beauty shines, blinding me
I see my reflection in you, distorted
As if I'm looking through to the other side
So thin, so frail. I could probably snap you if I wanted
I long to feel you in me
To slide your cold hard metal into my burning flesh
It burns only for you
My silverblade
My blood runs only for you
My silverblade
Now crimson from the wound where you stabbed me in the heart
My blood wipes so easily from you
And you go on being cold and beautiful
As I lie here
Descending into darkness
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dark_descent
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2005-05-02 16:09:16]
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Re: The Silverblade
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by crimson_regret420 on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 04:44:15 PM AEST
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| Amazing. I love it. |
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Re: The Silverblade
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:13:37 PM AEST
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Yes this is a very well put together poem, Awesome, Great rythmn and ryhme..all around Amazing Poem
~Clark |
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Re: The Silverblade
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:39:10 PM AEST
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All I can say here is -- wow!
This is an awesome poem, as the others have said already...It's chillingly beautiful, made shivers run up my spine..
A great piece of work..
Keep writing!
love, hope n faith,
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Re: The Silverblade
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:22:43 PM AEST
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Chilling... that's one way to put it. I rather like it. Your writing, as always, good.
Take care.
David |
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Re: The Silverblade
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by blade on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 03:52:25 PM AEST
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i can totally relate.
Iv'e tried to kill myself many times.
I understand. Its a very good way tyo express your feelings.
Keep up the good work!!
Love it lots!
AF |
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