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killed me
Contributed by
Jen54
on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:57:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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you killed me
words pored from your mouth
breaking my soul
extinguishing the light from my eyes
then forgetting to breathe
i fall to the floor
watching you
as you walk away from me
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2005-05-02 15:57:28]
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Re: killed me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:31:39 AM AEST
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Some of the best poetry is spontanous, and this is a terrific write. Short, powerful, no subterfuge. I've wielded the weapon and been struck down by it - and this rendition of the act reminds me never to do it again. Thanks.
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Re: killed me
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by Tiffyo4 on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 07:58:31 PM AEST
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i liked it alot jen nice job
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Re: killed me
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 01:22:17 PM AEST
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well written
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