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After that first night
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:36:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I picked you up at the airport took you to your hotel.
I got you and your friends settled and feeling at home.
Then took you all out for dinner and a movie afterwards
The time came I took them back to the hotel and
Then we went off to spend some time alone
I took you to the beach like I promised I would
Then I took a blond fold and covered your eyes
I walked you to the boardwalk and then took it off
I had everything just right for you
Candles and a blanket with some foods for me to feed you
And we had our first real kiss and another and another
We stayed up that night doing “stuff” watching the sun come up
Then I took you back to the hotel to pick your friends up
For a nice breakfast at my place where I would cook it for you
Afterwards I took you guys back to get ready while
I went to my jewelers to pick up what I had made for you
I spent all that day thinking when to give it to you
That day we had a wonderful time that I will always cherish
But what I will always remember is that first night
That first time with you…
Then I woke up before you got out of bed and got pretty for you
I brushed my teeth and then took out the strawberry bagels and French toast
I made you some fresh fruit juice of my own blend
Then I took everything back to the room
You were still asleep or where you pretending
So I put everything down on the ottoman and got into bed with you
I put my legs between yours and kissed your neck
As I slipped the cross I had made for you in your hand.
It has our birthstones and a diamond I picked out just for you
Something simple but pure full of faith and my love for you
Then I stopped kissing you when you opened your eyes
You looked so beautiful I just had to take it all in
If I could take you in rather than breath I would
There is nothing sweeter than the memories I have of you
You opened your eyes and wrapped your legs around me
Then you opened your hands and said you loved me
And I could not say I love you back so I just kissed you again
We kissed and kissed but then I had to stop coz I did not want your breakfast to get cold
I got all the food and placed it on the bed then took your chain off to put the cross on it
I kissed it and then put around your neck again
Then I kissed you and then gave you some toast to take a bite out of
And then some juice and I think we had a good start that day
I think that day was just amazing
And it was coz I spent it with you
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Re: After that first night
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:21:25 PM AEST
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now youve done it, i have tears in my eyes, this is so warm and so full of love, i wish i had someone to share my life with.... sniff... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: After that first night
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:23:11 PM AEST
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| very romantic, sounds like an amazing time. Beautiful write. |
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Re: After that first night
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:40:23 AM AEST
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You seem to have thought of every beautiful romantic thing to do and say to her. This is why it was made so romantic because you took the time to understand what it was that would make her happy.
Beautiful sighs and sends to hubby for a few hints
love Angelxxxx |
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