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I cry, I try, I think
Contributed by
edward_jarvis2000
on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:05:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I try to sleep,
In my dark space,
I dont feel safe,
Not even protected,
I feel nothing but,
Anger,
Sadness,
Happieness kills me,
I weep all night,
All night long,
It feels as no one,
Loves me,
I feel like ,
like crap,
Sometimes I see hope,
then evil,
hate,
and discruption,
fills my mind,
I feel like lashing out,
but instead i hide,
I hold it in,
untill i cry,
I cry to sleep,
i cry in my mind,
I cry when no one knows,
there are times when,
I've lashed out,
there are times when when i've,
Strong and held it in,
There are times when i felt so,
bad i've hurt myself,
there are times when,
i've thought of it,
I've thought of it all,
Suicide,
Self Mudilation,
you name it,
I thought it.
I cant take it any more,
I've let it out,
what you read,
is not even half,
Of what I feel
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edward_jarvis2000
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2005-05-02 13:05:40]
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Re: I cry, I try, I think
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:51:49 PM AEST
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| very descriptive...very emotional, powerful! |
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Re: I cry, I try, I think
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:42:22 PM AEST
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Always know that you have friends here, who'll lend an ear or a shoulder..
This is a very powerful and emotive piece, written with a deep kind of sorrow...
Keep writing, and never give up on anything...
If you ever need to talk, you know where I be :)
~kt
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Re: I cry, I try, I think
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:57:34 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem but sad |
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Re: I cry, I try, I think
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:34:24 PM AEST
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I hope in all of this (these trials that you are going through) that you don't give up hope.
Don't let the light go out with in your heart
don't give into the pain that causes darkness
Heartache comes and it hurts for a while
but there are smiles upon the shore
If you endure they will be yours
Don't put them out.
Just a few words of encouragement for a young and up coming writer. |
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