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Sweet Velvet
Contributed by
Zeldianus
on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 11:56:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lay me down in sweet velvet;
My head on satin pillows.
Your hair is like the branches of weeping willows
Lightly brushing against my face
With your arms locking me in your warm, loving, tender embrace.
Soft, succulent flesh pressing down on me naked and bare;
Lips, rosy and red, kissing my neck, a feeling O so rare!
The wind is still; the clouds are stripped away and the stars shining from the sky
In our window added to the soft, romantic glow
Of candles glinting off of your skin and out of your eye
As we become one and our bodies begin to flow
In one smooth, rhythmic motion
Has led me to the notion
That every night hereafter I will return within
For my little taste of heaven.
But what I love to do most, after our night of passion
Is fall asleep with you this way
To await the coming of the next beautiful day.
Copyright ©
Zeldianus
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2005-05-02 11:56:05]
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Re: Sweet Velvet
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by nightwolf on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 11:58:21 AM AEST
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| i like this poem |
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Re: Sweet Velvet
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:56:14 PM AEST
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sensuously done with class... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Sweet Velvet
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by Whisper on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:33:08 PM AEST
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Excellent write. Good word get those senses going .I enjoyed this . Nice work.
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Re: Sweet Velvet
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:22:13 PM AEST
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I really like the Imagery in this one seth....lol....Very well done again=]
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Re: Sweet Velvet
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by OnAngelswings on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 08:01:58 AM AEST
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| Of course this is one of my favorites....Very well done...Shari :) |
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Re: Sweet Velvet
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 01:49:33 PM AEST
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very romantic and sensual yes I do like it indeed
Michelle |
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