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IN A BLINK
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:35:47 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
My heart was heavy
As you held me up
me, like a blind man
holding an empty cup.
Remember we can always
speak
There's nothing in between.
You said, in a blink
jus one blink right here
blink, blink.
repeat.
Your patience much
greater than me.
Those leasons you
taught me.
Resting in God's
strong arms of luv.
Jus a blink to heaven above.
Now my ole hippy
waste not a minetes time.
Super naturally protects
In heavens shine.
Like Hiawatha great
He's my angel there's
no doubt, hey!
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-05-02 02:35:47]
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:57:59 AM AEST
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What a sad write, i especialy love the rawness of this
poem. I'm so sorry to hear you are going thru this Emy.
Hang tuff my friend,
Jane |
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:48:06 PM AEST
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emy hun, i know he is smiling down to you and loving this poem, its beautiful, big hugs n' love always, nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 10:10:38 PM AEST
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My heart was heavy
As you held me up
me, like a blind man
holding an empty cup.
Remember we can always
speak
There's nothing in between.
How very vivid....
Stay strong hun...
Love and hugs
Jenni |
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 11:47:34 PM AEST
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Emy this is so sad. Whatever u write about u always capture it's beauty. A heartfelt poem written with so much emotion behind it. He's always with dearest Emy. He'll always be watching over u. Lots of heartfelt hugs 4 u dear Emy.
love,
~sue~ |
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:27:41 AM AEST
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By the 3 poems I have read, I can tell you are hurting a lot, it is good to see you are expressing yourself and letting it all out.
I'm sure you and Jim will meet again oneday.
Johnny. |
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:24:58 AM AEST
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| Emy may you soon be writing in a more happier vene I feel so sad reading your work at times. Hugs and love from bernard. |
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 02:20:12 AM AEST
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| emy, you sure a star at writing such string and moving lyrics, you capture me in your words. Great work! |
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:54:44 AM AEST
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Deep heartfelt emotions so sad.
Death is not the end just the begining of a new journey.
Astounding write
Stay strong Emy love for his love is eternal
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:26:03 PM AEST
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| emy, this is great. The pictures are nice, but it's the poem that makes it. It's not too maudlin, and yet it says what needs saying. very nice! |
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Re: IN A BLINK
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 03:12:33 AM AEST
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This is a good write, and very heart-heavy...
Scorp. |
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