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Forever
Contributed by
Emmie74
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Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 11:51:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How can you do this to me?
Are you for real?
Finally I've found
My one need
My one desire
Please don't hurt me
I easily break
I love only once
So if you smash me
You'll loose me
Three things I've promised you
Same three you've promised me
But I'm scared
I'm scared of you
I'm scared of love
Value the trust I've put in you
Value the love I'm starting to feel
Keep those eyes gazing this way
I need to be wanted
I need to be needed
Let my heart and soul
Pour onto you
You're the one I want
You're the one I need
I will be yours forever
Copyright ©
Emmie74
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2002-07-22 11:51:12]
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Re: Forever
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 09:43:18 PM AEST
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Hey Em...looks like you've found the one for you at this point in your life...he better not hurt you...I don't think he will. I think you two will be great together. As long as you don't take any promises made lightly and don't let fear run your heart. I still say this is intense! I can just sense the emotion in it. It's awesome.
Love always,
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Re: Forever
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 21st August 2002 @ 10:54:39 AM AEST
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This is beautiful Em! I really like it! So you learned to trust someone...
Jaime |
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Re: Forever
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 09:32:00 PM AEST
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| This is a truely beautiful write. It was worded so nicely. keep writing....:) |
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