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your not the one
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:24:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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tonight i come to you...simply in need of a friend
my heart is broken in two... because it had to end...
to be wrapped in loving arms, would take all the pain away
but you left me and i could not make you stay...
so i ask you just one last time before we both let go
hold me in the way only you know...
tell me its okay to let you walk away
because every part of me wants you to stay
i can't let go no matter how much it hurts
i loved you way b4 i knew we'd make each other hurt
i guess god has his plan but who am i to mess with that
i guess you'd love me if i wasn't so fat..
i try to make it all go away
but in the end i would not want you to stay
after all is said and done
i realize your not the one
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Re: your not the one
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:34:02 PM AEST
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Makes perfict sense to me.
Sad but awsome write.
huggs,
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Re: your not the one
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:08:28 AM AEST
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A sad write yet so full of longing for release.
I like this.
Good poem.
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