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one or two
Contributed by
spooky
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
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every tear we shed, its for a reason,,
basically it's because we hurt,,
weather it be pain from nature,,
or pain from the heart,,
the pain from the heart is the worst,,
because it feels like part of you is missing,,
a feeling like no other,,
when you love someone,,
you shed one tear for joy,,
but when you shed two,,
it's because you lost something special,,
" one or two,,doesn't matter,,
it does to me ,,because it still hurts,,"
craig s. meeks
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2002-12-27 07:00:00]
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Re: one or two
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by aernby on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 07:38:52 AM AEST
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good insight -- good write
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Re: one or two
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 08:58:22 AM AEST
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touching beautiful i have cried two tears recently i know how you feel good write keep it up you have much talent and your work inspires
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Re: one or two
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 12:43:25 PM AEST
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Sigh..I'm all 'teared out'... Nice write, Craig.. Hope your holidays are special and your new year, grand!!
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Re: one or two
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 02:41:31 PM AEST
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It does feel like part of me is missing, a feeling like no other this one is such a true beautiful honest write...and the way you write about the tears....they do matter to me as well....because it does hurt so deeply, i beleive that each person hurts differently and deals with pain in their own way but this poem really touched me the way it's written it's so full of truth ...and reality....i enjoyed this alot Craig, your poetry is beautiful and very touching and captivating my friend....
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