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A Bad Day
Contributed by
footballfan385
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:34:01 PM in AEST
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I was having one of those days where everything seems to go wrong
One of those days where ketchup from a hot dog spills on your shirt
One of those days where my mom wouldn’t stop nagging
One of those days where I tripped and fell in the dirt
Mushin was having a bad day today too
His mom was very sick and he didn’t have the money for a doctor to save her life
He spent the little money he had on his poor mother and had nothing to eat
He didn’t want to lose his mom like he had already lost his wife
Today was one of the worst days of my life
I received a bad grade on a test and I didn’t finish my homework
I couldn’t hit a ball at baseball practice
My friend acted towards me like a real jerk
Jared was having a bad day today too
Today he threw up three times as a result of his chemotherapy yesterday
But he was still brave and fighting through
However if none of the treatment worked doctors said he would die in 54 days
Today was such a bad day for me
But I did make $100 at work and I didn’t know what to do
$100 could save Mushin’s mom and help Jared’s cause
I put the money in my wallet still mad about that day I tell you
If only I knew
If only I knew
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2005-05-01 21:34:01]
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Re: A Bad Day
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:39:24 PM AEST
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this is an a 1 masterpeice.
huggs,
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Re: A Bad Day
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:39:41 AM AEST
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I loved this thanks for letting us glimpse inside your world.
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Re: A Bad Day
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by Gigi_15 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:13:58 AM AEST
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| wow..this is a very deep poetry. a very good write. and very sad |
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Re: A Bad Day
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by BlindRomantic on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:45:15 AM AEST
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| seen better. |
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Re: A Bad Day
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by car21221 on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:43:37 PM AEST
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| i like tis poem i agree no matter how bad of a day we may think we have there is always someone who may have it even harder. |
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Re: A Bad Day
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by shaydie_lady on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 06:57:55 PM AEST
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That is really good
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Re: A Bad Day
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 03:39:34 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem because even though we might be having a bad day, there is always someone whose going to have it even worse! Great job! |
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Re: A Bad Day
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by rmarino on
Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 12:44:19 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this. It really makes you think about what a bad day truly is. The ending was great, sad but thats what happens. Good Job. |
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Re: A Bad Day
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by RunawayAngel on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 03:08:21 PM AEST
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aww so sweet
hope u have a better day
:)
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Re: A Bad Day
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by soselfxconscious on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 10:04:32 PM AEST
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| This is remarkable. People honestly don't realize what a "bad day" really is. Very powerful. Incredible. |
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