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Can't Hold On
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:24:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I just can’t hold on no more
I’m losing my grip
I am beginning to slip
No one is there to help me
So, I just can’t hold on any longer
I’m having a hard time fighting all this crap
So, I just can’t hold on no more
It just doesn’t work
I can’t hold on any longer
It just doesn’t work
I say, it just doesn’t work
The ledge is moving away
There is nothing to grab onto
Nothing to hold onto
I just can’t hold on no more
It’s getting harder to live in this life
It’s getting harder to control
It’s getting harder to find something to hold onto
It’s getting harder to hold on
It’s getting easier to let go
Easier to not hold on anymore
I just can’t hold on no more
I’m losing my grip
I am beginning to slip
It just doesn’t work
I can’t hold on any longer
It just doesn’t work
I say, it just doesn’t work
I just can’t hold on no more
I’m losing my grip
I am beginning to slip
I just can’t hold on no more
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sprinter27
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2005-05-01 20:24:49]
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Re: Can't Hold On
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by spazz911 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:39:13 PM AEST
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| don't let go or if u do just no that i wil be there to catch you and to help you get up... I am here to talk to too... u talk to me and I'll talk to you,...deal? |
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Re: Can't Hold On
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by death_not_be_feared on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 01:37:09 AM AEST
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| good write...hang in there |
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Re: Can't Hold On
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by anonymous1212 on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 09:33:40 AM AEST
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| i love your poem. I think you describe where you at right now veryyy well....hang in there! |
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