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Where Lonliness Resides
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:26:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When you dont know where to go,
And you dont know what to do.
When your heart's shattered like glass,
That's when lonliness is in you.
There's this one person,
Who makes you feel your best.
The love you feel when you're with him,
Is pounding in your chest.
The ache wavers over,
Every inch of your skin.
Even though the tears dont show,
They're pouring down within.
You're heart's a bleeding mess,
And you're hope a shattered dream.
All this lonliness and all this ache,
Is the most pain your heart's seen.
When you've lost the one you love,
In your heart is where lonliness resides.
Causing you to fall apart,
As you fade away inside.
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
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2005-05-01 17:26:57]
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Re: Where Lonliness Resides
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by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:53:45 PM AEST
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| Very true. Good write |
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Re: Where Lonliness Resides
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by Remy on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:19:32 PM AEST
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sad theme, beautifully put...
~Remy~ |
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Re: Where Lonliness Resides
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by twisted_dreams on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:51:39 PM AEST
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Wow.. that is so sad.. but so true.. it brought tears to my eyes.. becuase thats how i feel everyday.. Great write
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