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Breaking Down
Contributed by
tearznscarz
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:50:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Don't know why I feel this way,
I'm breakng down,
Everything in my little world is falling apart,
My life seems worthless,
I try to deal,
but it makes it worse,
acting like nothing's wrong just makes it hurt even more.
So I just push down the pain untill I can't take it anymore,
I'm breaking down.
The tears cloud my eyes,
then creep down my cheeks,
I'm so broken,
I'll never be fixed.
The scars will rest on my wrist forever,
I wish for them to go away,
but yet I create more.
It breaks me down.
So here I am alone again crying on my bed,
not to sure of what 'm crying for,
but the pain is to much for me to take,
It's breaking me down again.
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tearznscarz
... [
2005-05-01 14:50:06]
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Re: Breaking Down
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:09:39 PM AEST
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| very emotionallly written and and nicely put! |
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Re: Breaking Down
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by Tru2Myself on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:22:48 PM AEST
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Very Well writen... I know the feeling trust me... wanting to stop and not being able to... its really really hard. But don't keep your emotions locked up inside... it makes it WAY worse... talk to someone, anyone... If you need my I'm here... just message me!
Lauren |
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Re: Breaking Down
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by ivoryA on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:27:17 PM AEST
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| i know how you feel. Well as much as any person can know. no one can fully understand another individual. The point of this is to tell you your poem is well written and i feel that i can relate to it. the scars will never go away but will only remind you of your past so look ahead and keep writing. acknoledge what you did but try to fix it running away from problems doesnt help ive found that out the hard way your a good writer and i hope you keep it up :-) |
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Re: Breaking Down
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by CBlake on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:54:56 PM AEST
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| That's exactly how I feel rite now... it feels like it'll never get better but it has to eventually rite? Keep your head cuz if I can than anyone can... Great poem & keep it up! |
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