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Memories of the Past
Contributed by
Crimson_Valley
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:30:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I’ve always wondered why and why,
All I wanted was a simple hi.
I’ve gone through with daily pain,
Left out standing in the rain.
In the darkness my mind is gone,
My fight for life is almost done.
The eternal race just doesn’t end,
My heart shall never ever mend.
Streaks of happy, glee and sad,
Books of depression, joy and mad.
Reflections of the dreaded past,
Memories stand out clear and vast.
Here on my deathbed here I lie,
Please just leave me, let me die.
Copyright ©
Crimson_Valley
... [
2005-05-01 14:30:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Memories of the Past
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:49:01 PM AEST (User
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wonderfully written:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Memories of the Past
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:51:10 PM AEST (User
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Good poem, but I know you don't really want to die, or atleast I hope you don't.
It is always good to get your feelings out. |
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Re: Memories of the Past
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:51:15 PM AEST (User
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Good poem, but I know you don't really want to die, or atleast I hope you don't.
It is always good to get your feelings out. |
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Re: Memories of the Past
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovestruck on
Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 07:49:40 PM AEST (User
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i love all of the emotion you put into your poems! keep up the great work
-taylor |
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