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Like The Sun's Light
Contributed by
jacobskk
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:22:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You heat up my body,
You heat up my heart.
You light up my eyes,
And you light up the dark.
You’re as bright as the sun,
You shine with it’s rays.
I can tell that you’ll light up,
Our future days.
Like the sun’s light,
When its time to set.
You save all your colors,
For the very best yet.
You make your own sunset,
You rise as you please.
You travel the planet,
And you always take me.
Don’t ever quit shining.
Don’t ever shut down.
Don’t turn off your shine,
Before you spread it around.
I’m the only one who can hold you,
Without getting burnt.
You’re my personal sun,
I’m the one you won’t hurt.
I love you, I need you,
I love how you shine.
So come on, precious sunlight,
Use your flame to light mine.
I Love You.
Copyright ©
jacobskk
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2005-05-01 12:22:35]
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Re: Like The Sun's Light
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 01:33:27 PM AEST
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sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Like The Sun's Light
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:10:00 PM AEST
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Well done. I like the theme, and the way it proceeds through the piece. It's a good way of writing a romantic poem. Keep it up!
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