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Eternal Strife
Contributed by
Zeldianus
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:26:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Black as a starless, moonless night.
This is the color of my soul.
I am so alone in this lack of light
With no one to console
Me in this abyss of agony.
Feelings and thoughts of suicide and death
Escape from my mouth with every passing breath.
If I were to take my life
Would I be a coward attempting to free myself from this strife?
Life is all I have and often it is not pretty.
So I lay down my machete.
I will keep in my mind all the things happy and joyous
That I have known before
And write them down in my book of lore.
I know that things get better before the end
And, therefore, my hurt will always mend.
So I will keep my faith and stay the course;
Never showing an ounce of remorse.
Copyright ©
Zeldianus
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2005-05-01 11:26:41]
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Re: Eternal Strife
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:29:45 AM AEST
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This is a well thought out poem and I like how it sounded, very well done, I look forward to more.
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Re: Eternal Strife
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:30:47 AM AEST
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wonderful expression of feelings, warm welcome to ypdc, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Eternal Strife
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by OnAngelswings on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:10:05 PM AEST
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| well...This is a very good write...I like it alot...can't wait to see more...Shari |
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Re: Eternal Strife
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by bear on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:10:38 PM AEST
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| Very good. Life does suck. But as in the words of Joe Dirt "Life is a garden, dig it." You do have to just keeping pressing on. |
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