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Black
Contributed by
CJo
on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:23:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Your hands around my neck
The pressure's getting tighter
Weakness taking over
My head is getting lighter...
I think back to the good times
How we'd laugh till it hurt
The love in your eyes
Such passion you'd assert...
Playing in the park
The grill's aroma out back
Lounging on the couch
It's all dissolved and turned to black...
Your eyes squint into mine
The air cannot get through
I'm taken to another place
Where the good times start brand new...
Catch me as I'm falling
This life becomes worthwhile
Life begins as it ends
...I'm awakened with a smile...
Copyright ©
CJo
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2005-05-01 10:23:31]
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Re: Black
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by mylady on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:55:44 AM AEST
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| nice peom. and good luck . |
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Re: Black
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:01:02 AM AEST
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All things fade to black...And life is no exception...Nice write and good rhythmn and ryhme..
~Clark |
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Re: Black
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:51:58 PM AEST
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| my goodness this touched my heart more than words could explain great write |
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