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E-MAIL
Contributed by
mylady
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 07:49:39 AM in AEST
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E-mail
XxXxXx
If I don’t write.
You don’t write.
What a fool i am.
To think you would write.
It seem you don’t care.
You would of had wrote.
To see if am alright.
Being sick thinking of you.
You never wrote.
I stop writing to see if you care.
You never wrote.
But am ok...
Copyright ©
mylady
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2005-05-01 07:49:39]
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Re: E-MAIL
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:12:03 AM AEST
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| This is a different write but good. Its hard to deal with the thought of someone not caring but it happens and it hurts. Its nice to see your work on the site and hope to see more….Steve |
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Re: E-MAIL
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by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:19:43 AM AEST
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| Sounds like your mad. Your words are a bit confusing. but that's okay I get that way too sometimes. 4 stars |
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Re: E-MAIL
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by Kione on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:30:05 PM AEST
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| Nice job, a couple of grammatical errors though. |
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Re: E-MAIL
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by Jaycee on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:29:35 PM AEST
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| You captured the spirit of callousness that so many are guilty of. Do not be too quick to give your heart to someone. Let them be worthy of it. |
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