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Wyrm

Contributed by Nazmythian on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:06:53 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



~

As I recall ~

It was
insignificant ... really
Barely an inch ...
inch and a half long at best
Lying there
at the bottom of the bottle

And I remember ~

Staring at it
between pours
as it rolled and swayed
The liquid's movement
appeared to
restore it to life

I laughed ~

at the illusion
that it moved
Even after the contents
of the bottle had settled
Knowing the impossibilities
Marveling at the manifestations
of intoxication


~





Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2005-05-01 05:06:53]
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Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:11:39 AM AEST
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Loco!

Gettin' ready for Cinco de mayo?

--Ghosty



Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:45:03 AM AEST
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Good piece of work written very nicely. Its amazing how people see things and how they write it out. Poetry is such art that everyone views different that’s why I love it so much. Keep up the good writes so and take care….Steve


Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 06:01:34 AM AEST
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Ohh this was just intoxicatingly good.
I liked it, altho i dont drink i still found this good.

Jane~


Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:12:34 AM AEST
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This was a real treat...loved it.The thought of the worm coming alive as the tequila flows...been there...great! and I prefer the song too..


Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:33:52 AM AEST
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anyone drinks enough, and it just might come to life lol, this poem is so excellent, i love your style here:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:52:44 PM AEST
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Ah, tequila.... been there, tried that and became drunk in a way that would compare to none other.... Yep.... I get this.

Love the title, btw. I spotted it in barnfinch's comment section a bit ago and, not knowing it was yours, thought I'd check it out. I would have been here earlier... but got distracted which right about now, seems rather amusing or ironic or something.


Between pours,
~Snem~




Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:03:04 PM AEST
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Nice work. After enough tequila you don't even feel it slide down your throat. I love the song too.

Dove


Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:01:28 PM AEST
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Hmmmmmmmm..... You sure you didn't have one sip, Nazzy? LOL. Just kiddin', my friend. Deliciously intoxicating, these words, these images... Beautiful, surreal, simply perfect... Loved it. Not a big fan of the drink as well.. I'm more of a Sangria wine type of girl... But don't tell La Mere that, LOL! ;-) You're always creating new ways to amaze us, cheri. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. All my love. Forever,

Your dear friend/fan,

Stephy! *I'm with Mothy! Cinco de Mayo is in 3 days! Tie one on, everyone! Oh....yeah.... I mean... drinking is bad........... lol. Awesome piece cheri.*


Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:58:37 PM AEST
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Very well portrayed...you sure you're not familier with it????


Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 04:47:56 PM AEST
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...
Wow. Interesting.

I have never recieved such inspiration from tequila, nor its preserved sub-animalia companion. That you could be so, and write a well-crafted poem therefrom, says... something... about you. What, I have no clue. But something.

*wink*

Andrew


Re: Wyrm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 11:40:54 AM AEST
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Illusions of life, yes. I can totally relate to that right now. Nice poem - makes me think of tequila and baja ca. I haven't had the experience but I've had friends that have. Good write.




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