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Painful Heartache in His Hands
Contributed by
KishaLovesCare126
on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:35:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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5/1/2005
3:07: AM
Tonight your heart is a mess…
You feel like you got nobody left…
You cry sad tears of memories…
None of it was meant to be.
Tugging at thoughts and emotions…
Inside is a horrible feeling…
Off to the side are secrets hidden…
A lot more can be unforgiving.
One piece missing from your arms…
Her beautiful body wrapped around yours…
Trusted lover, angelic friend…
Why god? Why?
Did our love end?
Your world painted – slightly gray…
Later on this heart-break will fade…
Another sigh wasted tonight…
You fight with frustration in its wake.
You gave your heart for her to love…
In re-turn she tore it up…
Minuets pass feeling like forever…
Tonight you will recover.
© Care Strom
Copyright ©
KishaLovesCare126
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2005-05-01 03:35:39]
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Re: Painful Heartache in His Hands
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by girish on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 04:42:44 AM AEST
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this may be a lost love. think that the one who has departed is really unlucky. i don`t ask others to love me. i love them and they return their love. if one should come to you he/she is already born. read my poems on love particularly the poem "A desire for reunion". Send this piece to your person. give me the ffedback.
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Re: Painful Heartache in His Hands
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 07:32:29 AM AEST
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i can really relate my b/f just broke up with me last night....i feel like that exactly except i dont think i'll recover lol
great write though,i love the feeling in this write...
love han xx |
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Re: Painful Heartache in His Hands
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:00:31 PM AEST
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| That's so nice of you to write this about your friend. That describes the feelings of heartbreak so well! I can relate to it. It feels like I got no light in my life, other than my mom. It's a great poem! It's like you understand his feelings. Jenny |
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Re: Painful Heartache in His Hands
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 07:57:45 AM AEST
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This was a good write and I wish that when I lost love I had a friend like you their for me. This is the first of your writes I think I’ve looked at and it was a good read that was much enjoyed. This write flows really well and keeps the writers interests all the way to the end. Thank you for sharing a little piece of your heart through these pages you write. Take care and I’ll continue to read your work…..Steve |
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Re: Painful Heartache in His Hands
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 11:53:30 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem Care I thought this was a
lovely write for your friend who is obviously
hurting. I like how you said, "Later on this
heart-break will fade" which is very true. Keep
up the writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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