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MY GUARDIAN ANGEL 2
Contributed by
emystar
on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:11:53 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
My long ago companion
dearest friend, oh my heart.
Wise ole hippy
jus lighting cold empty dark.
Oh my guardian angel
You have your super
powers now.
Eternity is yours, wow!
repeat.
You took my hand
leading me to God's light.
Seek him in nature
to get thru cold nights.
Our good times live
so much luv to shine
on in eternities light.
Precious moments,
yours, mine.
There are those that we never forget but there are those such as Jim that change your life jus being in their presense.
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: MY GUARDIAN ANGEL 2
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 03:51:06 AM AEST
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Emystar
This piece is lovely I'm sure your friend will love you for your wonderful tribute. Keep it up you are a talented writer.
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Re: MY GUARDIAN ANGEL 2
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by girish on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 04:53:17 AM AEST
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Emy,
A nice tribute to your Jim. I wish I shall become like him in anyone`s life. keep your poems published.
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Re: MY GUARDIAN ANGEL 2
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 10:05:57 PM AEST
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A really awesome poem. It's really positive and beautiful.
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Re: MY GUARDIAN ANGEL 2
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:23:11 AM AEST
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aww em you must be really hurting, you express your feelings excellently here.
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Re: MY GUARDIAN ANGEL 2
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:23:09 AM AEST
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Emmy as always I Love ur writes
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Re: MY GUARDIAN ANGEL 2
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 03:03:49 AM AEST
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What a beautiful tribute! This was so full of love and hope...I'm really glad I read this.
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Re: MY GUARDIAN ANGEL 2
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:20:48 AM AEST
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| Emy, what a wonder dedication and tribute to your friend. :o) *S* Cynthia |
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Re: MY GUARDIAN ANGEL 2
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by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:54:42 PM AEST
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| This is a sweet poem. The third stanza really ties the poem together. I think you could make a song out of this poem. It has a good rythm for it, and the first stanza would make an excellent chorus. Keep posting! |
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