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I will never stop Dreaming of you.
Contributed by
Butterflygirl40
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Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:17:13 AM in AEST
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DreamsandWishes
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when I dream of you it seems so far away.
I cannot be with you now.
All you are now is just a daydream of my past.
And all I want to do is scream of such dreams.
when I dream I cry.
my wishes are to be with you everynight in my dreams.
But somehow somewhere I know we will be back together.
But untill I am back with you .
I will keep on dreaming of you.
Untill I die.
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2005-05-01 00:17:13]
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Re: I will never stop Dreaming of you.
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 04:05:51 AM AEST
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Butterflygirl40
I think this is your best yet.Yes you are improving. Can I give some advice ? When you ask for comments it almost sounds like your begging for a comment.
I suggest you ask for comments so that you may have help in improving your poetry. Keep posting as you have much to offer. :)
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Re: I will never stop Dreaming of you.
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by girish on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:22:56 AM AEST
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god love poem. read my poems on love "A desire for reunion", "The rumour that spread my love", "In the hours of my dream" you will enjoy your love more. send these pieces to your loved as your own and give me the fedback.
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