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crashing down
Contributed by
sp3llicup
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:23:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i wish there was something i could do
ive tried and tried but you never pulled through
now that your gone my world as come crashing down
its so hard being here without you, in my own tears ill drown
you were my soul mate, my lover, my best friend
why did God call you, and make my life end?
without you im nothing
you were my backbone, my everything
things are going back to normal, im trying so hard, im trying
but i cant stop thinking about you, i cant stop crying
i keep seeing you die over and over in my head..its horrible,
this pain i feel all day everyday is unbearable.
in my hand i hold this knife
thinking, should i use this to take my life?
i just wanted to die
so i could be with you forever flying in the sky
but the truth is.. you'll always be in my heart
no matter the distance..our love will never be pulled apart
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2005-04-30 21:23:12]
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Re: crashing down
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:48:38 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt, excellent poem, im sorry for your loss... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: crashing down
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:08:27 AM AEST
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I too am sorry for your loss. I just lost someone that was dear to me.
prayer, strength,
ey |
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Re: crashing down
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 11:13:12 AM AEST
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losing someone you love is so sad...through this poem i can feel your pain - the writing is so powerful and full of emotion.
- Bethani - |
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Re: crashing down
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 10:07:02 AM AEST
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very touching write.
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