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KRISTENA
Contributed by
kiss4roq
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:06:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Killed by people who can’t stand my ways,
Reading depressing poetry for days,
I wonder what will become of me,
Something good? Or something worse for thee?
Taking the time to think of life,
Ever so slowly I pulled out a knife,
Not knowing what to expect, I threw it on the floor,
Again I stopped myself from doing anything more
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2005-04-30 21:06:45]
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Re: KRISTENA
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 09:15:12 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. There is a way out but you have to want it and that might even mean enduring even more pain. I know that sounds unfair but that is life. I wish others could have commented on your poem. |
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Re: KRISTENA
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 02:03:27 PM AEST
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| Nice acrostic with well rhymed couplets. This is a ten on my scale. |
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