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°°°Inspiration°°°
Contributed by
OreO
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Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
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I want to take the time to say
That for your home i'll surely pray
Im not big on religion as you see
But my friend you are an inspiration to me
I know heartache has surrounded your soul
At this time of the year when you miss her so
She's your guardian angel watching over you
So please don't cry and don't be blue
Your dad he knows you love him so much
And your kids they give that special touch
Other family, they may not come around alot
But you always move forward, you never stop
I know one day i'll face this to
I just wanted you to know, i look up to you
When that day comes and she goes to the stars
I just hope that im half the woman you are
I hope down i wont fall, i hope in pieces i won't break
Just thinking about this all makes me shake
Your words have inspired me to beleive i'll be ok
When that final day for my mom comes to stay
If you should cry, and if you should weep
Just know i'm your friend, you can trust in me
You've given me much to think about in life
I just hope that i too, will be alright
So yea this poem it might be real sad and all
I just wanted to say, your my inspiration most of all
I hope in life i can carry myself like you
It's clear in my eyes, why your dad chose you...
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Re: °°°Inspiration°°°
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by venkat on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 01:49:03 AM AEST
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| Oreo !...I read christina's poem on her mother who went to stars. you are anticipating a day which you can't escape. it will be my turn.You know my father is 91 and my mother 83 suffering with many health problems.They love me like their darling treasure.pious they are divine couple i worship them.what if any thing happens either to me or to them.can't imagine a future tragedy. I like this poem. its good that you are half the woman. yea I can hear your heart beat.A wonderful poem with full of tender excellent human feelings .Thanks a lot I can feel You are a gem at heart. |
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by Mystery_Girl on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 03:20:06 AM AEST
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| Oh Oreo this is so sad.....i dont know what to say......but just that people that we love so very dearly i am sure we would see them one day again........Take care.....Tanya,,,,:-) |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:24:40 AM AEST
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Oreo, this is a very touching poem!! I'm sure Lowman appreciates it a great deal. I know the pain of losing your parents...somehow, it never completely goes away... Hang tight..
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:24:09 AM AEST
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| OMG OREO
God tests us for things like this to make us stronger! God bless you,I never thought I'd be an inspiration to someone that was a great feeling! Thanks so much,I'm so glad I met you on here! Christina Lowman |
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Re: °°°Inspiration°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:44:02 AM AEST
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Wow OreO this was truly touching. I don't even know how to properly reply to this. I mean usually I have alot to say but now after reading this I'm truly dumbfounded. However I can say that I'm glad I read it. I guess you could say it inspires me to accept things in a whole new perspective. Like a chain letter that never was meant to be I hope that people who read this carry something away with them after they're done. Thank you for the write.
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 04:08:21 PM AEST
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| Oreo, this is so beautiful... stay strong! |
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by spooky on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 05:53:04 PM AEST
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| so much love for others ,,how can you not be inspirational,,to those who need you most,,even we your friends,,christina would be happy knowing people like us accept her as a friends,and are there for her |
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Re: °°°Inspiration°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 06:36:09 PM AEST
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OREO I JUST HAD TO LET YOU KNOW THAT THIS TRULY MADE ME CRY,I CAME TO READ IT AGAIN,AGAIN,I REALLY LOVED THIS & THAT YOU HAD ME IN MIND WHEN YOU WROTE IT TOUCHES ME DEEPLY! THANKS AGAIN,YOUR GREAT!
CHRISTINA |
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 07:36:29 PM AEST
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| This is a very touching poem Oreo. I hope you and your family will be ok as well as Christina's. My heart is with you. *S* Cynthia |
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 10:34:39 PM AEST
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| very beautiful you have a lot of love to give my friend... christina is lucky to have you... keep them coming i enjoy reading your writes |
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Re: °°°Inspiration°°°
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by wordsy on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:15:24 PM AEST
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In the heart of inspiration one find oneself.
I can only hope that C.L. knows the friend they have in you.
as always,
wordsy. |
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by nomad on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 07:18:44 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful write, OreO. I have no doubt that when the sad event occurs you will more than endure. You will lead. You are strong, and even if you do fall will quickly rise. |
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by karoody on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:58:47 PM AEST
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| That is a very sweet poem. To find words like this, don't you think you all ready there? Heartfelt wishes for your mom....i just went through same thing with my dad....i know your pain, be strong and keep going. you obviously have lots of support--so lean if you need to. |
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