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Dark Obsession
Contributed by
crimson_regret420
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:55:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My heart bleeds with pain,
I bite my lip hard,
As my blood flows from it,
Staining my clothes crimson,
I am your silent victim,
You are my dark obsession,
I cry myself to sleep,
Because you don’t even know me,
I hate the way you smile,
The way you make my skin crawl,
The way I can’t take my eyes off you,
And especially the way I love you,
Take off your bitter mask,
As I do the same,
We can bleed together in times of pain,
And die together when we can’t take it anymore,
I pour my heart at your feet,
Bleeding and writhing,
Hating myself for loving you,
But loving you all the same.
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crimson_regret420
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2005-04-30 20:55:57]
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Re: Dark Obsession
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:59:56 PM AEST
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I am one for ryhme and rythmn tho this did not have much of that is was very good and I really enjoyed the ending...bitter sweet loving...very well done.
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Re: Dark Obsession
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by sp3llicup on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:33:38 PM AEST
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i really liked this alot...its really good...keep writing! :)
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Re: Dark Obsession
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:42:17 PM AEST
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deep... passionate... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dark Obsession
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:46:53 AM AEST
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I love this. It was very good. I can relate to it also. Great job..
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