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On Broken Wings
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:50:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Pummeling swiftly torwards the ground
Within this darkened cloud
That fatefully surrounds
Is
My life,unseen and deep seated in misery
With everything that ment anything to me
Burnt to ashes in agony
Now
On broken wings I fall
Marred of the dark sky so tall
With only the earth as the end
Of it all
. . .
A fallen angel, with beautiful black wings
A serenade... she sings
As she flies torwards me
. . .
Catching my tumbleing life
Before I meet my demise
How she found me in the middle of the night
Still I wonder in the back of my mind
. . .
My angel
that flew to save me
. . .
On Broken Wings
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-04-30 19:50:23]
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Re: On Broken Wings
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by spazz911 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:14:42 PM AEST
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| i really like this one it shows a lot of feeling and thought and i like how it sounds it comes off really well and it is great write |
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Re: On Broken Wings
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:37:53 PM AEST
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this is sooo pretty....... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: On Broken Wings
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:28:37 PM AEST
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| you are coming out of the slump. some of your formatting in the beginning leaves one to wonder why you did it that way. broken wings, very nice. |
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Re: On Broken Wings
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:33:58 PM AEST
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Fabulous, Clark! I love writes like this... where emotion sits not-so-quietly beneath and behind rich imagery. This, I'm certain... will tug at many a read... even - if they don't know why.
Well done! *applauds*
~Snemmy~ |
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Re: On Broken Wings
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 11:25:36 PM AEST
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Clark this is a beautifully written piece of poetry so well portrayed. Heavenly divine. A magical master piece . Well done.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: On Broken Wings
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 04:24:06 AM AEST
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Beautfifull even in the sadness.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: On Broken Wings
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by OnAngelswings on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:25:02 PM AEST
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| your really very good...this is so soulful...Shari :) |
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