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Memory
Contributed by
Archie
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Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 04:06:01 PM in AEST
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Intro: I have yet to fall in love but based on the things my friends have gone through I put together this song. I have been working on it for some time. Think of it as a country song.
I woke up early this morning
and I thought
I could smell your pefume
My heart imagined that last night I held you
in loves deep interlude
But it was just a dream of false reality
keeping me from facing you are gone
Something I was thinking so subconsciously
when you told me we were done
(Optional replacement to first 4 lines of chorus)
(False hope
hidden in your memories
late at night my heart still dreams
of being with you)
(Chorus)
I miss
the times that you held me close
telling me you loved me so
but i have to move on
I can't
keep pretending you're not gone
I must admit to myself
that you're trapped in my memory
Just before I walked out of my door
I thought i heard your voice again
I looked over my shoulder to make sure
it was just illusion
The ghost of you keeps hiding in my heart
I can not shake the love that we have lost
Since the time you said we had to part
more than a year ago
Chorus
I thought our love would last until forever
I could see the rocking chairs upon our porch
I would hold your hand until the day
life ebbed away from us
but now I''m in love with a ghost
(Upstep Chorus)
(Repeat chorus 2 times)
Ending
Just before I walked out of my door
I thought I heard your voice again.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-04-30 16:06:01]
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Re: Memory
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:01:38 PM AEST
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heartbreakingly beautiful, archie, also i really love the 'trapped in your memory' line, excellent write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Memory
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by Alina on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:50:43 PM AEST
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You truelly did a maginificant job on this! The last stanza and final two lines is what made this great!
Keep up the hard work.
ALINA |
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Re: Memory
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by mylady on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:48:36 PM AEST
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| though it was nice. like the frist part with the pefume. ....nice..... =) |
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Re: Memory
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 01:23:35 AM AEST
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Archie, this was such a beautiful song. Incredibly emotive i loved the rawness of this.
Thanks for posting,
Jane~ |
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Re: Memory
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 06:08:28 AM AEST
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Excelent writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Memory
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:12:59 AM AEST
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I thought our love would last until forever
I could see the rocking chairs upon our porch
I would hold your hand until the day
life ebbed away from us
but now I''m in love with a ghost
Magnificent so very beautiful. A love in the past still living on in your memory. Keep up the fantastic writes.
LOVED IT
Bravo
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Memory
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 06:35:52 AM AEST
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Always a pleasure...
You are one of the upcomming
genuinely talented song writers
whose work I always remember
as a song in my head.
This is just one brilliant example
of your mastery.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Memory
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:08:07 AM AEST
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Well put, well written. I´d love to hear it to music. A very well done song.
Take care.
David |
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