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I Dream Of You
Contributed by
smiley_jennyxoxo
on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 03:17:36 PM in AEST
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DreamsandWishes
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A girl flirts with you everyday
She looked like she was molded in clay
I could never be that beautiful
I just felt jealous and terrible
That I have even let you go
You turn me down as I ask you to
Give me another chance, but after that
You tongue kiss me, no time to chat?
Of course, you have to go to class
Time hasn't let our conflicts pass
You just try to turn me down gently
As you leave me to bleed quietly
For I have now gained nothing
I'm desperate, I need to have something
To keep me alive and strong
I still think that with you is where I belong
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smiley_jennyxoxo
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2005-04-30 15:17:36]
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Re: I Dream Of You
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 06:52:17 PM AEST
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This was a very good poem I can relate to
this poem cause i dream of my ex alot but he
isnt around anymore he drowned like
4 yrs ago!and i miss him like crazy!
other then that i love this poem:) |
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Re: I Dream Of You
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by kitty_express2001 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:25:14 PM AEST
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| I loved your poem |
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Re: I Dream Of You
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 02:14:04 AM AEST
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A great poem very well conveyed. It's usually in dreams we see what our heart really desires and yours seems to be that ure still in love with ur ex.
A wonderful poem. Well done.
hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: I Dream Of You
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 05:06:58 AM AEST
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| This was a good read and very well written. Dreams can be hard because so often they show what we don’t have and may never have. Its hard to loss a love and it takes time to get over but believe me with time you’ll learn to love another. Take care and thank you for your comments on my work….Steve |
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Re: I Dream Of You
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by deepviolet on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:09:25 PM AEST
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| aw no worries. if this guy dumps you like that you don't want him. i know that sounds cheesy and overdone, but it's true. i like the wording and expression in this poem, and good luck. |
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